6 Comments

1. travis | October 20, 2005 12:34 AM

   travis,

   you should crop the top down to the white tile, and the black up to just her feet, almost so she looks like she's standing on the frame. The black and white are a really great contrast to the red, green and other earth tones. Her content dozing face gives a great peaceful minimalism to this shot.

2. ronn | October 20, 2005 10:37 AM

   i am partially agreed with travis. yes, he got the point there. but to think of it again, it will become just like another stereo-type kind of shot. very straight-forward with no background details to support the story behind the picture.

   more over, the framing linea is not balance between the left and the right edge. if you do crop at the bottom part, it will cut-off portion of her shoe.

   btw, this is just my personal opinion. i am not a pro. :)

3. Rock | October 20, 2005 2:20 PM

   Another exhausted rider.

4. Alan Somerville | October 20, 2005 6:59 PM

   Another WONDERFUL shot!

5. the farmers wife | October 20, 2005 7:53 PM

   THis is so good. Again, that damn white tile. I wonder how many millions of square feet exist in the N.Y. Subways. And how the heck is it cleaned...or not? I love the decorative mosaic at the upper right.

   She's tired, waiting with her gigantic flowers.

   Also, I would like to say thank you Travis for your commitment to this project.

6. bc | October 22, 2005 2:01 PM

   Such a quiet bundle of flowers in a rather noisy and busy station.